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Second piece towards my latest project called: Above the clouds. This piece took me around one hour and half to make and i would say im quite happy with the results, but if you have a suggestion please do aim it towards me.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Many thanks to the following for their great stocks:
The Boat: [link] Vulture: [link] Cloud 1: [link] Cloud 2: [link] Moon: [link] The man: Purchased from istock.. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Well, to start, the image and theme are beautiful. It is a very skillful, even masterful display of photo-manipulation.
One thing that feels off, after careful observation of the image, is the lighting. While "luminosity" and overall light are carefully blended together, to create what seems like a unified image, the light direction is not.
If you look at the boat and the vulture (is it?) the light is hitting from right to left. While the clouds and moon suggest the light coming from left to right.
This is by no means a deal breaker... for it does not show at first sight, and most might not notice it. However, it is there.
As a possible solution, I would suggest flipping horizontally the clouds and moon separately to keep the moon where it is... the reason being that the composition is beautiful.
It is a very interesting project... and an admirable effort. Thank you for sharing!
~ Ethereal. I am so enamoured with the night sky. What lovely contrast between the deep polished ebony of the flesh and the pale luminescence of the clouds. Magnificent work.
One thing that feels off, after careful observation of the image, is the lighting. While "luminosity" and overall light are carefully blended together, to create what seems like a unified image, the light direction is not.
If you look at the boat and the vulture (is it?) the light is hitting from right to left. While the clouds and moon suggest the light coming from left to right.
This is by no means a deal breaker... for it does not show at first sight, and most might not notice it. However, it is there.
As a possible solution, I would suggest flipping horizontally the clouds and moon separately to keep the moon where it is... the reason being that the composition is beautiful.
It is a very interesting project... and an admirable effort. Thank you for sharing!
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